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Fatal Crest

Chapter 1: Into

dis:i do not own naruto, but i own the oc she's soo awesome no taking ask me first.

this is my first naruto fic so give good reviews

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intro

legend.

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hi talking

hi thinking

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It was the day of the genin graduation exam.

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"Alright class, it is time for the graduation exam for you to pass. I want you to make one henge and make three perfect clones. We'll start with Kerina Suzanara." Said Iruka.

"Okay."

"Come on Keri-chan. You can do this!" Naruto whispered.

"Thanks Naruto-kun." Whispred Kerina. Kerina walk down to the front of the class stood infront of Iruka and waited.

"Alright Kerina, one henge three perfect clones."

"Ok, Iruka-sensei." Replied Kernia. Kerina focused her chakra and begain. "Henge clone!" Shouted Kerina

There was a loud pop and smoke filled the room. When the smoke faded, there were four Narutos standing in front of Iruka.

"Wow! You did both jutsu at the same time." Iruka was impressed.

(one hour later)

"And lastly, Naruto Uzumaki." Iruka called.

"Okay, this will be easy!" Shouted an excited Naruto.

"Just get down here, Naruto." Said an exasperated Iruka.

Naruto ran down to the front of the class and started to focus his chakra. Concentrating, he began to do hand seals. At the last second, a bird flew into the window and distracted him. When the trade mark smoke left the room, lying on the floor was a single clone. And what a sorry clone it was. In fact it looked like it was dead or close to it. The clone was pail and not just his fake skin, there was no life in it.

"I'm sorry Naruto, you fail." Naruto walked back to his desk and sat down next to Kerina.

"I'm sorry, Kari-chan. . ." Said a very depressed Naruto.

"Don't worry Naruto, it's okay." Karina said in a comforting tone. She gave Naruto a comforting hug.

"Tomorrow, you will get your Jonin insructors." After class had ended, Naruto went and sat on the tree swing in depetion.That was until Kerina came over to help him.

"Don't be sad Naruto-kun. I know you could have passed the exam. I know because I was waching you. If only that bird had not flown into the window and made you lose your concentration, you would have passed." Kerina explained. This brought a small smile to Naruto's face.

"Thanks, Keri-chan." Said Naruto.

"That's enough sulking. Let's go home, Naruto-kun."

"Okay."

So they went to their house (a/n: yes, they live together, but not in that way...at least not yet hehehehe.) until Mizuki stoped them.

"Naruto, I'm sorry that Iruka-sensei failed you. It's just that you remind him of himself. You see, Iruka-sensei is an orphan and he thinks he is helping you to grow stronger." Expland Mizuki.

"That's fine and all, but I still failed."

"Well then, I guess there is only one more way left, Naruto, to pass you."

"Really Mizuki-sensei? There's another way? What is it?" Naruto and Kerina asked their questions at the same time.

"Yes there is, but it involes you stealing the Scroll of Sealing from the Hokage. If you learn a jutsu from the scroll, we will pass you." Expland Mizuki.

"YES! I'm so going to pass now!" Scearmed Naruto.

"Damnit. Tone it down, Naruto!" Said Kerina.

Later that night, Naruto and Kerina snuck into the Hokage tower to steal the Scroll of Sealing. They were sneeking around looking for the scroll room, yet their adventure was cut short.

"What are you two doing in my house at this hour?" Questened the Hokage.

"Um . . .er . . . um . . ." Kerina stammered then she shouted, "Take this ninja center-fold jutsu!"

Pop. Naruto transfromed. In his place was a female verson of himself who was naked with clouds in covevent placese.What happend next sarized Kerina as well descasted her. The Hokage just stared and then his nose erupted in a fountain of blood; he fell unconscious.

"I knew it! I knew he was preverted." Kerina exclaimed.

"Hehe. I knew he would fall for it." Said Naruto.

"Well, now to find that scroll." Said Kerina.

"Let's see . . . " Naruto split from Kerina and the two searched the house. "Here it is; got'cha!" Said Naruto.

Five hours later at the the clearing, both Naruto and Keina were tired from lerning the shadow clone jutsu and were moving on to other jutsus. Naruto desided to learn the mass shadow clone jutsu and Kerina wanted to learn the warp snipe (a/n: which should come in handie in the future.). A jutsu that takes little chakra but alows the user to move at the speed of sound for 1 second, but tires the user greatly.

Five hours later at 3 A.M., they were completely exausted and were taking a break before moving on. That was until Iruka-sensei apeared in front of them.

"Got'cha." said Iruka.

''Hey, it's Iruka-sensei!" Said Naruto.

"What are you doing here?" Questoned Kerina.

"What the hell are you doing here with that scroll?"

''What, this? We come here to learn jutsus from the scroll so you will have to pass me! Mizuki-sensei told us so."

'Mizuki . . . why would he do this?'

And just as Iruka thought this, about a dozon kuni rained down apon him.

"Damnit, Iruka don't get in my way!" said Mizuki.

"Naruto, Kerina, don't let him get the scroll!" Shouted Iruka-sensei and so they ran. The two kept leaping though the trees, then went to the ground and hid for about five minutes. All was quiet until Mizuki fell to the ground.

''How . . . how did you know it wasn't Iruka?" Questend Mizuki.

"Because I am." Said Iruka. Disguised as Naruto, he popped back to Iruka. Mizuki was about to throw a giant shuriken at Iruka when Naruto and Kerina intervened.

"You two! What do you think you can do to me, your just stupid demons?" mocked Mizuki.

"What you mean demons?" Asked Karina.

''Oh, that's right. You don't know. I should probably tell you before you die."

"NO! You fool, don't tell them!" Shouted Iruka.

"Do you two know what happened twelve years ago when the demons kyuubi no kitsune attacked the village and rokubi no raiju attacked the mist village. When the demons were sealed away then were sealed into two children . . . and do you know who they were?" Said Mizuki.

They both shook there heads.

"It was the two of you. You are the demons who attacted the village's. Naruto is the kyuubi no kisune and Kerina is the rokubi no raijuu. Hahahaha! Now you'll all die!" With that said Mizuki chased at the three intent on killing then.

"Warp snipe no jutsu!" Shouted Kerina, making the seal nesercary for the jutsu and warped above Mizuki and drop kicked him. He fell face first onto the ground and the shrukin went into a tree. She jumped to Naruto's side.

"If you ever hurt Iruka-sensei, I'll kill you." Threatend Naruto.

"Ha! You can try to kill me, little fox." Taunted Mizuki.

"Mass shadow clone no jutsu!" Shouted Naruto.

Suddenly, hundreds of Narutos filled the area.

"What how. . . how did you?" Stammered a very frightend Mizuki.

"You are going down." Said Naruto. Then hundreds of Narutos beat Mizuki to within an inch of his life.

"Naruto, you did good and you graduate. And to celebrate I'll take you both out to raman." Said Iruka.

"Yeah, you did it, Naruto-kun! I'm so happy!" Sceamed Kerina while enveloping Naruto in a crushing hug.
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note:the rokubi is a weasel cat yes there is such a thing look it up.
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i hope you all like this itl probly end up as a prety long fanfic
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~Vampire-Maiden:iconVampire-Maiden: Oct 19, 2006, 5:23:34 PM
Five hours later at the the clearing, both Naruto and Keina were tired from lerning the shadow clone jutsu and were moving on to other jutsus. Naruto desided to learn the mass shadow clone jutsu and Kerina wanted to learn the warp snipe (a/n: which should come in handie in the future.). A jutsu that takes little chakra but alows the user to move at the speed of sound for 1 second, but tires the user greatly.


the words that have large spaces aound them ahve typos, you may want to fix them. other then that, good job. so thats wat youve been doing during class. naughty naughty boy.. hiding that from me.. psh

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~sensay-ninetails:iconsensay-ninetails: Oct 20, 2006, 12:36:40 AM
wtf iv told you about it for weeks and i started befour summer dork
~Vampire-Maiden:iconVampire-Maiden: Oct 21, 2006, 10:25:54 AM
ok first of all, i hate it wen i make the comment look like sumthing, then wen they post it, it completely changes... its anoying

Second of all

i forgot.... ^.^"

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